Penalty Flag on Life

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Author’s review

I must admit that the initial eye grabber was cost. During the time I paid to have my novel edited there was a promotion being offered. However, what has me filling out this quick survey was the professional care that I received from Joanne, my editor. As she read my novel, she didn't ignore glaring errors because I didn't pay for a higher package. Instead she took the time to explain and offer corrections to typos and/or formatting that wasn't initially provided by the editing packaged that I had chosen.

A short introduction

Number one draft pick Noah Boss is granted seven days by his newly acquired team to settle the affairs of his murdered brother but finding out who killed his brother makes returning to assured fame and wealth a difficult decision. Bound by a teenage oath he promised his deceased father, has Noah battling against he desire to seek REVENGE.


LaWayne Williams is a Chief Master Sergeant in the United States Air Force and has worked in the field of education for more than twenty years. LaWayne has expertly intertwined his military and civilian experiences to weave fictional stories with compelling and relatable characters. He has published two other novels: Rehabilitation and High School Diva.

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