Tyranny and Defiance
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A short introduction
Tyranny and Defiance begins at the immediate aftermath of the Boston Tea Party. The royal governor is replaced with a military governor and the arrival of 4,000 redcoats closing Boston Harbor. The defiance of Sam Adams and John Hancock lead to Lexington and Concord.
William E. Johnson, safety consultant, lives in Latrobe, PA. He became enchanted with colonial Boston, while stationed there as a Naval Flight Officer many years ago.
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