Mythatania - The Adventures of Erin, Owen and the Mythfitz
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Scottish siblings, Erin and Owen Macdonald, are swallowed by the Loch Ness Monster and brought to the magical land of Mythatania where ALL creatures heard of in myth and folklore have gone to escape the outside world. There they meet THE MYTHFITZ, Unee, a bossy male Unicorn, Pegora, a level-headed female Pegasus, Frost, an ADHD, lumbering male Yeti, Salandra, a blasé, bratty, female Sasquatch and they embark on a wonderful adventure as Erin and Owen try to find their way home and retrieve a golden Unicorn horn along the way.
Bio: Nicholas Julius is a writer/director/producer/actor based in NYC. His production company is Long Way Home Productions. Nicholas's latest live action film starring Michael Kenneth Williams, THE DEVIL GOES DOWN has just made its 92snd FF, and has won 29 awards thus far. His latest animated film ERIN, OWEN AND THE LOCH NESS MONSTER has made 16 FF and won 8 awards. Erin, Owen and the Loch Ness Monster is a hybrid opening of the feature script, MYTHATANIA - The Adventures of Erin, Owen and the Mythfitz, based on my newly published children's book of the same name. The book(s) are published by Macauley Austin publishers. Both films have distribution on 6 platforms.
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