The Lost Planet
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A short introduction
It's July 4, 2094. Major Tony Norman wakes up next to the lovely Jessica—a sexy security officer from Logan Airport. Tony doesn't know it yet, but needing an oxygen mask just to walk outside is the least of his worries when an alien fleet encounter space station Peacekeeper at Saturn. The high council orders him to find a way to communicate with the aliens. But when they destroy Peacekeeper, Tony fears the only language the aliens know is war! Meanwhile, the alien supreme commander, Ilg, is obsessed with dinosaurs and pet humans. But when Ilg finds out about the nuclear threat humans pose to the alien empire Ilg represents, he knows he has to take drastic measures to eliminate the threat. Will the world fall apart in this deadly game of chess between the aliens and humans, with Tony and his new girlfriend, Jessica, stuck in between? Why is Supreme Commander Ilg so obsessed with dinosaurs?
Author: Cynthia Fridsma
As far as back as I can remember I've been listening to exciting stories told by my mother. Her stories have been everything to me. I grew up reading books from Edgar Allan Poe, H.P. Lovecraft, Philip K. Dick. It was my mother who inspired me to start writing and telling my own stories. My writing career started after a handicap in 2014. I have a tremor in my right hand, numbness in the fingers and pain in my wrist. Besides writing, I play guitar once a while, in Jimi Hendrix style. I live with my husband and two pet bunnies in Amsterdam.
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